EyaTree's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Artefactos Del Caos OP]

Not bad

This is pretty decent, assuming you did most of the pixel art yourself. How did you make this? I recognize most of the characters. I am curious, what is the song playing? I recognize it but can't remember exactly. Miyavi maybe?

Fer11234 responds:

Sorry if I tell people the truth and what is the song by flash sticking out and I feel much more at the Reply does not work but thanks for your positive comments and the song know the name but that of opening number 2 of the series Bleach and this interesting story if the problem is that I thought to do it in Spanish but for you and there are more people speaking English than Spanish in the English voi up before making a trailer for you right?
And sorry for the English I used the google translator.

[Cuicly Life!]

Cute

This is pretty good, and the animation's decent. Cute little story as well. One thing: you'll probably want to use less recognizable copyrighted music if you don't want to run into any trouble. Though I do enjoy the Naruto music haha.

Yul responds:

yieaa i kinda use copirighted music for this, that's why i tryed to put every page i used to download all that music in the credits... i have a friend that was suposed to create the music for me but... uuhh, he was to busy u_u!

[Sheriff McGyro]

Love it

Always love Sexual Lobster's animation, but this was especially solid. And the plot was a nice change from the usual. I like to see a bit of diversity, not that the usualy sexual humour isn't hilarious. And the last line takes it for me haha. Keep up the good work. :)

Sexual-Lobster responds:

heheh thats the only line i wrote.

[Neu2]

Feedback

To be honest, I'm a bit baffled that you are working out the opening credits of your movie, as they're probably one of the least important things to start with. Anyway, I'll give you some feedback to work on this, as that's obviously why you submitted this.

The black gaps with nothing in them are way too long. I kept wondering if the video was glitching. It's not dramatic, it's just a tad annoying. The fonts are nothing special, and the music is generic. You might want to add some sort of texture instead of just a boring black screen. Also a more logo-like name for the movie would be better and add some appeal. But the main thing, yeah, you really need to make this shorter, as your viewer will lose interest very quickly. Hope that helps.

descom responds:

Danke schön.
Yes it was helpfull.